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A dear brother. by ~Kalkus:iconKalkus:



I walk among the living, I walk among the wounded, I walk among the dying.

I walk among fellow dead.

I stop, to let a living pass me. She looks to my eyes, and moves on. A female of whom I would long to see many times, had my hearts not have been dulled to that.

I look, to the left are cots, wounded living, some complacent, to be alive and sane was to be in torment until the body was repaired, and the mind would remember all. One male of whom I would pity, had my mind not have been dulled to this. He is dying, a deep purple stain surrounded his chest in the once-white covers. He does not know me.

To the right, are more, but none catch the eyes of a Reaper.

I feel nothing.

One looks to me, eyes widening slightly at me. What is it? I think to myself. As if on cue, he softly shakes his head, gives me a smile, so I stand by his side, crouch down, and I listen.

And so he whispered out; "You are lucky." But I hear him more than he would ever think, for nothing is heard save for his whisper, the moment was not a second or two longer than it took for him to breath in, out and then speak. It would forever hang upon my dulled mind.

His three mandibles click, the last is gone, now laying among the dead thirteen leagues away. He looks away, down, then closes his eyes, never to open them again.

You are lucky. I think to myself. To him I said nothing, I did nothing.

I feel nothing.

I look up, into the eyes of that female, that female that now stood on the other side. She shakes her head at me. She looks down to the blue armour, stained colours of purple and green of the dead-eating foe.

I look into her eyes, she too widens her eyes, as if looking into the eyes of her Reaper. Beautiful slitted blue eyes meet the pale eyes of a Ghost.

What is it? I think to myself. She looks down again. To the eyes of her beloved.

I feel nothing.

My heart would have cried for her, as my orbs of vision would, had both not been changed to feel no weakness. She holds a hand to her belly, tears in her eyes as she places her other hand on his bloodied cheek.

But that moment was gone. I walk away, no longer the dead warrior's brother and his lover's freind from many years ago, but a Ghost, a shadow of a mission's desire. An emotionless automaton. I shall go into the vast unknown, I shall never return here.

I fear nothing.
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Just a random insight into the mind of a Ghost.

Sangheili are my most favoured kind of creature, save for Dragons, because there's so much more to them, the more you think about them, read about them.

But I never know how they treat a death in the family, whether the death of a Sangheli's loved one is real or un-official.

Ranting most likely, but it's just a curiousity.

Sangheili (C) Bungie.

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What did you think of the Narrator?

What do you think of the theme, atmosphere or mood?

What did you think of the other two characters?

What did you think of the ending?


If you can, could anybody that is interested about this prose, if you could answer the questions, I would muchly appreciate it! ^.=.^

Ghost is meh!
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*Sniff* Beautiful! ^^
Thank you sister. ^^

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This made me cry... Faved :)

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Welcome to the occupation!
Really?

Bloody nora, gotta get in more nolstalgic/down-time moods then.

*Gives a hankerchief.*

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*takes hankerchief and wipes a way tears* Mabye you should

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Welcome to the occupation!
:P

Wort!

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Thank 'ee for your fave brother. ^^

*Glomp.*

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*:cries: happily* This one of the most wonderful things I have ever read about Sangheili. It touches me deeply each time I go back and read it. I don't know where this came from but I am glad that it came out. I am going to :+favlove: this for all time. I hope that this will not be the last thing you write like this Kalkus. You are a great writter and this just helps prove my point even more.

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*is flashbanged* "I CAN'T SEE...and can someone answer the phone?"

Meep! ^__^

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